Ok for a first.
Its ok. But I would try to draw some more frames. Instead of using tweening for your entire animation.
Ok for a first.
Its ok. But I would try to draw some more frames. Instead of using tweening for your entire animation.
It really didnt take long, I'll keep that in mind thanks :)
Funny but not specatular
If your drawings were solid I would have given it a 10. The beginning is funny then the humor kinda trailed off.
I'll work on that much more, thank you StarvingStomach.
Good story, good timing, bad animation.
I give you a 7 because you had 2 out of 3 quailities for a nice piece of art. You need to spend more time on your character animation. Get some nice poses, and actually have the characters body move when they speak.
Do your arms move when you speak? q:
I think I get what you mean though, and you're right.
Thanks!
almost perfect
Everything was amazing. Except the animation with the scientist with the yellow gloves and the other women. Not much was going on there and I really couldn't see any expression. I would take it out.
well it was my first (and only) cartoon this year using some actual dialogue so i thought it was kind of a landmark !
I like to draw cute things, then kill them.
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Where cute things die
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