Anti-Climatic.
I give it a 7 because your art was great, the story flowed. But its was really anti-climatic. You could have ran with the wackyness a little more and just made it completely over the top,
Anti-Climatic.
I give it a 7 because your art was great, the story flowed. But its was really anti-climatic. You could have ran with the wackyness a little more and just made it completely over the top,
nice but not a 10
I give an eight. Nice compositions, nice music, but character animation could have been a little better. If that was top notch I would give it a perfect score.
FUCKING AWESOME
One word to say. Professional.
Fucking awesome!
You my friend, are awesome. Simple appealing song, simple apealing animation. The only thing not needed was the pee joke. It didn't fit the rest of the animation. But that doesn't deter your score. Fucking awesome.
Jesus Fucking christ!
Now thats what I'm talking about!!! This is art! The character designs, the story, everything thing was perfect. I had trouble figuring out what was going on at first, but thats because the story runs deeper than what is here in the animation. Defiantly checking out your comics. I LOVE the Irish accents, They add so much to the characters, You hardly see Irish accents in main characters of animation.
Top notch dude, You obviously love what you do. Can't wait to see more of this. You should have T-shirts ready to be sold.
almost perfect
Everything was amazing. Except the animation with the scientist with the yellow gloves and the other women. Not much was going on there and I really couldn't see any expression. I would take it out.
well it was my first (and only) cartoon this year using some actual dialogue so i thought it was kind of a landmark !
not a fan of stick figures
its ok, but you really need to spend more time on the look of your piece. Sound effects are key thing also. You need to expand your library in sound.
I wouldn't call this animation.
This is a disgrace to all animators. Moving shapes up and down. So Maybe the dialog is ok, but there is no character in the moments of the shapes. This is something that 7 year olds do. Not animators. Put more expression in the moments of your characters.
I like to draw cute things, then kill them.
Age 36, Male
Animator
Where cute things die
Joined on 1/3/09